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Shower from the east
magic sunshine in the west
rainbow up her sleeve.
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© 2012, 2017 Betty Hayes Albright
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(Photo taken this evening, about 6:30 pm)
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Haiku #7 – 2012 posting
April 3, 2012 by Betty Hayes Albright
Posted in Haiku and Senryu, Poetry 2010 - present | Tagged haiku, magic, nature, Poetry, rainbow | 24 Comments
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WOW WOW WOW, Betty!! I really really love this haiku–and your photo is magnificent!! How playful–“rainbow up her sleeve”!! You’re amazing, SOS!! (This is seriously “print and send” worthy–can I share it with my cousin?) love, Caddo
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Of course you can, Caddo! 🙂 I’m flattered. This was one of the prettiest rainbows I’ve seen in a long time. It was actually a double one but it doesn’t show in the picture.
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Very clever.
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Hi Betty
Beautiful!
I love rainbows, I can never get them right on a photo though 🙂
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Wow! What a fab picture!
And the haiku is brilliant
Much love to you Betty
Christine xx
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Beautiful haiku Betty – I like the way you’ve made the sun feminine (why shouldn’t it be, of course, after all it IS in German, die Sonne…), it gives it a more ‘natural’, magical feel. And what a wonderful photo – what was your wish? 😉
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This always magic in a rainbow…
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as she swishes her skirts mother nature is full of surprises!!
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Perfect, Betty 🙂
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Oh, I love this one, Betty, clever and playful, and stunning image! xo
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Beautiful! I love the “rainbow up her sleeve”
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The westering sun having a rainbow up her sleeve—just magical and marvelous and so very “Betty”!
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Another wonderful haiku. You do this form so well Betty, lets face it you do all forms well.
I needed me a rainbow today. I’m off to a funeral, my first since Rod’s. I’ll keep this image and haiku in the forefront of my mind.
Thanks Betty
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Tricia, I’m glad this could give you some comfort. My condolences to you for the difficult times you’ve been through lately. Wishing you peace!
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Wonderful Haiku, delightful surprise and photo too!
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Thanks everyone for the nice comments!
(Sorry for this group reply – will try to catch up with blogging soon. Sore back….)
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How beautiful is the haiku and a lovely photo xx
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Thank you, Willow! 🙂
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i love the image of a rainbow up my sleeve…hmmmmn…promise
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Glad you liked this, Anna! 🙂
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I also love your creative idea–rainbow up my sleeve Love Ethel
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Thank you again, Ethel!
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I echo all the ‘wows!”…’rainbow up her sleeve’ Simply lovely!
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