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Haiku #62 – Drift

August 23, 2014 by Betty Hayes Albright

They drift like feathers

two thoughts passing in the night

dreaming the same dream.

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© 2014 Betty Hayes Albright

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on August 23, 2014 at 9:01 pm | Reply The Unfolding

Love the last line.

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- on August 26, 2014 at 1:10 pm | Reply Betty Hayes Albright
  
  Thank you – glad you liked!
  
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on August 24, 2014 at 1:54 am | Reply journeyintopoetry

As always Betty, such beautiful depth to your haiku. Hugs xx

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- on August 26, 2014 at 1:11 pm | Reply Betty Hayes Albright
  
  Thank you, Christine! 🙂
  
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on August 24, 2014 at 4:48 am | Reply Ina

What a lovely poem : ) xx

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- on August 26, 2014 at 1:11 pm | Reply Betty Hayes Albright
  
  Ina, thank you so much! That means a lot to me.
  
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on August 24, 2014 at 5:20 am | Reply Cynthia Jobin

Thoughts passing in the night…what a potent idea! I wonder if they actually do, and how far they go…..can they travel to another continent? This has the wispiness of haiku and yet the weight of musing….very nice!

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- on August 26, 2014 at 1:14 pm | Reply Betty Hayes Albright
  
  Thank you, Cynthia! I do believe thoughts can travel anywhere – even across the universe, and faster than the speed of light. (Maybe I’ve been watching too many PBS documentaries on quantum string theory, etc. ? 🙂 I love that stuff.)
  
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on August 24, 2014 at 8:53 am | Reply slpmartin

A most interesting turn of a phrase…enjoyed your poem.

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- on August 26, 2014 at 1:15 pm | Reply Betty Hayes Albright
  
  Thanks very much, Charlie!
  
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on August 31, 2014 at 10:21 am | Reply Ben Naga

And waving in the breeze?

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- on January 4, 2015 at 12:53 pm | Reply Betty Hayes Albright
  
  Yes, or hopefully more than that. 🙂
  
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on December 30, 2014 at 4:37 pm | Reply joannagilmanhyde

same here.

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