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They drift like feathers
two thoughts passing in the night
dreaming the same dream.
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© 2014 Betty Hayes Albright
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Haiku #62 – Drift
August 23, 2014 by Betty Hayes Albright
August 23, 2014 by Betty Hayes Albright
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They drift like feathers
two thoughts passing in the night
dreaming the same dream.
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© 2014 Betty Hayes Albright
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Love the last line.
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Thank you – glad you liked!
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As always Betty, such beautiful depth to your haiku. Hugs xx
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Thank you, Christine! 🙂
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What a lovely poem : ) xx
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Ina, thank you so much! That means a lot to me.
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Thoughts passing in the night…what a potent idea! I wonder if they actually do, and how far they go…..can they travel to another continent? This has the wispiness of haiku and yet the weight of musing….very nice!
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Thank you, Cynthia! I do believe thoughts can travel anywhere – even across the universe, and faster than the speed of light. (Maybe I’ve been watching too many PBS documentaries on quantum string theory, etc. ? 🙂 I love that stuff.)
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A most interesting turn of a phrase…enjoyed your poem.
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Thanks very much, Charlie!
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And waving in the breeze?
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Yes, or hopefully more than that. 🙂
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same here.
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