(a re-post from 2012)
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And after the blaze, what?
Would they,
like snow on fire
end in vapor
against the starry night?
She stands below his mountaintop
frozen to her ache
and lights a match.
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(c) 1995, 2014 Betty Hayes Albright
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December 27, 2014 by Betty Hayes Albright
(a re-post from 2012)
.
And after the blaze, what?
Would they,
like snow on fire
end in vapor
against the starry night?
She stands below his mountaintop
frozen to her ache
and lights a match.
.
(c) 1995, 2014 Betty Hayes Albright
.
A nice twist at the end of the verse.
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Thank you Charlie – it seems to have been inevitable.
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I can feel the fire, and the ice…so economically and beautifully rendered, Betty.
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Glad you liked it, Cynthia.
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Yet some memories linger among the ashes …
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Yes they do… more vividly and lasting than most, perhaps.
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Sigh.
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Betty take a look at my blog. I need your advise on my work. I will be really grateful to get a feedback from a pro.
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Keeping balance. Nicely written.
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