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She’d waited long enough.
The time had come
to clear the near forgotten room
he’d carved into the earth.
Ancient harvests deep inside
would long be in decay.
She braced herself
and slow approached
the thick, elm door
(and later swore it opened
of its own accord).
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In the shaft of light
that followed
she was struck with wonder.
Instead of baskets
filled with crops
long gone to rot
there was the scent of quickening:
potatoes
with their eyes still wide,
beets the color of her heart,
carrots orange and smooth,
and onions with their papery skins
like pages of old memories.
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On the side were apples –
barrels of them, red and crisp
(she took a bite and begged forgive!)
.
How could this be,
a place outside of time?
In haste she left
and sealed the door.
There would be no clearing out
(except for one sweet apple
which she secreted away).
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© 2009, 2016 Betty Hayes Albright
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(revision of an old Mayberrie poem)
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Oh…I do love the story in these lines…something magical about the place.
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Glad you enjoy the Mayberrie poems, Charlie. I’m still trying to figure out what to do with them, besides continuing to revise.
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Get them together and publish them, Betty.
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Not even sure where to begin, Thomas, but have been pondering publication. I appreciate your words of enthusiasm!
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Love this … Time loses its meaning where the heart is concerned
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So true, Peter… I don’t think real love is ever lost. Thank you for the comment!
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This is beautifully painted and told. It makes me curious about the Mayberrie sequence. Though each poem I’ve read here is quite capable of standing alone, I am always left wanting to know more of the story. Have you collected them anywhere all together? They might make a wonderful chapbook.
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Cynthia, I’m pleased you think they’re worthy of some kind of chapbook! All the poems have been posted here over the last few years but not necessarily in order (as they didn’t come to me in any planned way). The Mayberrie page (tab for this is at top of blog) has links to each poem in “order” (sort of) but I don’t know if they’d ever be publishable as a coherent story. Plus the style varies from poem to poem. If you should ever have time to go through them all, please let me know what you think. I really appreciate your interest!
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I will go to read them, Betty, at moments of leisure. 🙂
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Magical poem, as usual, Betty. The sense of magic wrapped up into the opening of a door and a root cellar out of time. Love is out of time too in these poems, and out of station in life, and out of the passage of time itself. Magic.
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You truly “get” this poem – and that’s gratifying.
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I love this, Betty. Especially the little smile at the end. 🙂
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So glad you liked it, Ben. The ending you liked was one of the revisions made at the last minute. It seems some poems (all poems?) are alive, always rewriting themselves….
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Yes. Occasionally one will even wake me up in the middle of the night demanding a revision.
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Such are the nights of a writer…. 🙂
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