.
The lights blow out
and the room grows
starkly quiet
in the dark
.
except for the drip
drip
dripping
of a faucet and
.
those thoughts
she had ignored
now howling
like the wild
of the wind.
.
.
© 2015, 2017 Betty Hayes Albright
.
September 21, 2017 by Betty Hayes Albright
.
The lights blow out
and the room grows
starkly quiet
in the dark
.
except for the drip
drip
dripping
of a faucet and
.
those thoughts
she had ignored
now howling
like the wild
of the wind.
.
.
© 2015, 2017 Betty Hayes Albright
.
Thoughts tonight of Puerto Rico. Excellent poem, I love your sparse style, potent and reverberating!
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Thank you, Bob, for your kind comment. And yes, thoughts for all those hard hit by the hurricanes…. can’t even imagine what they’re going through now.
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Bob I totally agree !
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Funny you post this today – we have a scheduled power outage tonite into early Fri a.m. 😉
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Oh fun! 😆 Am glad it’s a planned outage and not caused by a storm!
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Yes, yes, this is just subtle enough to allow us to hear our own story. Love!
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Thank you, Audrey! Just what I was going for. 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Wyco!
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Beautiful words.
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Thank you!
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When there is empty space, it can be filled. (K)
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Ah yes, as they say, nature abhors a vacuum. 😊
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Wow! You really caught the kind of moment we all have when our technology fails and all our fears turn up at once. That tap is dripping for all of us…
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Glad you saw that in the poem, thank you! Yes, we’re all in this together. (Whatever “this” happens to be at certain times.)
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So much depth in so few words, brilliant piece here Betty ❤ ❤
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Thanks so much, Kim. 🌸💕
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you’re welcome Betty ❤
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wow, the powerful analogy taps in the hearts and minds of all readers ❤
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Thank you very much, Neha! 💕
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i can hear
a drip
and feel
the power
of those thoughts 🙂
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Thank you, I’m glad for that! 🙂
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This is a lovely poem! Great post!
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Thank you, Meher! 🙂
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POWER POINT
At times we’re powerless
But for our reaction
To the situation
Response is our power
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That’s a powerful little 4×6, Ben. Yes, “response is our power”! 😀
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Internal and external both.
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I really like this! Quite unique and special; I’m glad I found your blog. 🙂
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Thank you so much! It’s nice to meet you. 🙂
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amazing! may be you can read my blog too.. 🙂
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Thank you! I’ll check out your blog soon. 🙂
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