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It was a long, silent fall
into the days
where “Dad” was spoken
in past tense.
He was tall
like autumn shadows
and he made us laugh
like the dancing, crackled leaves
around our feet.
And he would fast remind us
that trees return
to green
in this orbit’s gentle whirling
when spring gives back again.
.
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(C) 1997, 2017 Betty Hayes Albright
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1955 – Deception Pass, Whidbey Island, Washington State
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(A tribute to my dad, who passed away twenty years ago this month.
My apologies to those who have read it previously.)
Yes dad is in the present tense and whispers in the wind
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Nice! I like your comment. 🙂
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Don’t know any father who would not love to be remembered so finely.
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Thank you very much, Charlie.
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Wow. What a beautiful tribute. I love the image of being “taller than Autumn shadows”, and then, just like the circle of life you’re representing from opening to closing, bringing it back full circle to the green returning to the trees. Well done .
This was especially meaningful for me since I just lost me dad a few weeks ago. Writers that we are, I also had to pen a tribute to him. Isn’t it amazing how cathartic and therapeutic writing can be?
Thanks for an extremely well-written and touching piece.
https://jamesclarkthenextiteration.wordpress.com/2017/08/31/an-iterative-tribute-to-dad/
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James, I’m so sorry to hear about the loss of your dad. My sincere condolences. It’s hard to lose a parent. After 20 years I still miss mine.
Thanks for the link to your poem – I’m clicking on it now.
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Thank you. I’m sure I will be missing him also 20 years from now. I’m glad to see from your example that I will still be able to bring him to mind with fond recollections.
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This is true – the memories remain as vivid as ever, with added perspective as the years go by. Thank you again, James.
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So lovely. x
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Thank you!
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Truly beautiful. A wonderful tribute.
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Thank you so much!
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This is so beautiful it can be read many times and still reveal something new. I often post the poem I wrote about my Dad too. 💜💜💜
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Thank you for such a lovely comment, Willow. 💕💕
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My pleasure I hope you are well 💜💜
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Doing all right here, just the usual. 😰 Hope you’re having some good days yourself, Willow. 🥀💕🥀💕🥀
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I am Betty ❣️🖤💜
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Glad to hear that, Willow.
💖💞💖💞❣️😄
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😉😉
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Lovely. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe. 🙂
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This is a wonderful poem. The kind that makes you memorize the poet’s name when you’ve read it. I’ve never read anything better on this theme!
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Thank you for such a nice comment! Your kind words honor me.
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Memories such as these are timeless, to be read over and over, reminds us we are not heading into eternity, we are eternity gazing at itself in the mirror …
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Oh, I like that, Peter – “…we are eternity gazing at itself in the mirror…” Yes! Thanks very much. 🙂
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That’s fro The Prophet “On Beauty”. It has so much meaning it has stayed with me …
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Had forgotten that’s where it came from – I love The Prophet, a favorite book of mine since first reading it at 17. Unfortunately it’s been many years since I’ve read it. Thanks for bringing it back to me!
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I alway keep extra copies around. By them at library sales, because I’m always giving them to people… you are right, I think it’s the one book I’ve read the most times
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Great idea! They make a wonderful gift.
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What a great tribute, Betty. This makes the day feel good.
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Thank you very much,Thomas – I’m glad about that!
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“He was tall
like autumn shadows
and he made us laugh
like the dancing, crackled leaves
around our feet”
This is such wonderful phrasing and it evokes the man to me. When I eventually manage to write a tribute to my Dad (gone in 2005) I hope it will be as good as this.
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I’m so glad you liked it and will look forward to your own poem about your dad. Thanks for such a nice comment!
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what a beautiful tribute indeed, I’m sure he’s looking down and smiling if not laughing in joy ❤
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Thanks, Kim – I do often feel his smiling presence. He had such a wonderful sense of humor. 🙂
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Beautiful tribute! Thank you for posting this.
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Thank you, Steven, I’m glad you liked it.
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What a beautiful memory of your dad. He gave so much to you, all the most enduring things, helping you become the caring person you are. He is with you always, and that is something wonderful to know. You made me think of my dad as well. Thank you, Betty.
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Sharon, I appreciate that very much and am glad it made you think of your own dad. We do carry them inside of us and continue to feel their presence.
(Both my mom and dad were very caring and loving people, for which I’m thankful.)
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Even though I have already read this there is no need for any apology. Well worth revisiting.
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Thanks, Ben – I appreciate that.
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As I appreciate both your words and your presence, Betty.
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That goes both ways. 🌻
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Here’s to the future then, Betty. 🙂
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Aye! 🙂
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A beautiful poem, Betty, and a lovely tribute to your dad.
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Thanks very much, Cynthia. It’s always good to hear from you!
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Wonderfully penned Betty. A lasting tribute to the man you so obviously admired and even now, years later, your heart rightfully aches for those days. You could rest in the safety and comfort of his shadow because that assured you he was nearby…he still is. Thanks for sharing him with us.
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Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words! Much appreciated.
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I find your peace with what is within this poem. Your father is alive in your words, Betty. Lovely.
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Thank you for the lovely comment, Audrey. 💕
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♡
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A lovely tribute. 1915? He probably spent the war in the Navy. Only those of us who have known those men (and women) seem to “remember” what war means. Most everyone else seems to have forgotten. Tsss.
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Thank you so much! Yes, my dad was a Navy veteran serving in WWII. Served on the Astoria and stayed in for 20+ years. (My husband served in Vietnam, so I’ve learned a lot about war, from them both…. Sadly other people forget all too soon.)
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Navy and ‘Nam… so many memories. So few people listening. 🙂 have a lovely week-end.
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Yes – so few people listening….about ANYthing these days. Thank you for connecting. You have a pleasant weekend yourself! 🙂
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Reblogged this on OwnShadow and commented:
Anyone unfamiliar with Betty Hayes Albright’s site Seasonings is missing consistently wonderful poetry, beautifully-crafted yet seemingly spontaneous…see for yourself!
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Thank you so much!! 😊
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You are welcome!
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A beautiful and touching and poignant poem. What a lovely tribute to your dad. ❤
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Thank you very much for reading it!
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Aww my dad passed away on 1997 also.. missing him too 💕
If you have the time, please visit mine too 💕
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Dads are special! Sorry you lost yours as well, Gwendolyn.
I’ll check out your blog, thank you. 🙂
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This is a warm, elegant and heartfelt poem that really moved me. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment!
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It was well deserved!
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Nice👌👌😍
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This touching poem grabbed me & left me in thought. thank you!
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Thank you so much for reading it!
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